They spin around me
-Thousands-
In loud Rushing silence
Walking, running, stumbling- cursing lifeless things
Angry towards senseless objects- the only innocent targets
The slow and fast paced get kicked, squeezed-
pushed out of the way
All-
Seemingly human
Various ages and races
Same planet; different planes-Status and destination
Same species-Ranked classification
Most sit, many stand and few wonder
Handicapped men and women
Death at heart and mute in soul
Blind to acknowledge an honest smile
Faintly breathing-
Inside Compassionate-free bubbles
Some show signs of life
But when I look into their eyes
Their cyber minds begin to analyze-
Appearance-traits and gear-
Determine compatibility
Prejudiced morals and biased perceptions
Outweighs love and intuition
My surface- Speaks to their minds
Tells my biography And pumps ignorance-
Into a bubble reality-Self Fiction
Some float towards and others expand away
Liars approach and haters scorn
All-
in see through shields
I rise and another slides in-
Behind, in front, over and under me-
A struggle for my seat
Doors open
The few who wish to leave are blocked in;
Power suits, Jumpsuits, Trench coats, hoods and Caps
Designer fabrics, oversized logos and price tags-
Scares-Clouds-Suppresses understanding
Different Means; Same instinct
Diverse strangers; One gang
Men shoving women
Children pushing elders….
I join in-
Impolitely push to exit
A struggle through revolving gates
I ask myself-
Why do they run?
Are they ALL late?
Why do they push to get a few feet ahead?
I stand to the slde and watch the mob go by
Now- late- I walk up the steps-
step over the homeless blocking the exit-
Leave subway desolation
And enter street seclusion
"Down" Town and "Up" Town merge
I open my heart- put on my see through shield
and float about
Bubbles
A.M
Friday, January 28, 2011
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Great imagery. I especially like "see-through shields."
ReplyDelete"Cyber minds" was a little odd to me. It seemed out of place, but I like the poem overall.
Thank you Randall. What do you think I should replace it with?
ReplyDeleteI like this, Amanda. It's metaphysical, but the images are very tangible--particularly at the end. You can see how mechanical and self-absorbed all the people in the poem have become. "Cyber minds" didn't bother me because so much of the poem features sort of rigid, technical language: "Same species, ranked classification." I dug it.
ReplyDeleteMaybe I just have a prejudice against the word "cyber."
ReplyDeleteWhoa ... this one just pours out at me. I love it.
ReplyDeleteI love the imagery. I did not have an issue with cyber. It fit the overall mood of the poem. Well done!
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ReplyDeleteThank you. I wrote this one on a train in Philadelphia, I always felt inspired there. I`m glad you like it.
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