tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4637227068206470117.post434437359321715757..comments2023-03-21T02:22:52.900-07:00Comments on AMPoesy: Can Love LieAmanda Mirandahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13862027490366822209noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4637227068206470117.post-86346043397406452032011-03-24T17:36:00.582-07:002011-03-24T17:36:00.582-07:00Well, you are very welcome, Amanda. Thanks for sha...Well, you are very welcome, Amanda. Thanks for sharing your work, and helping to decorate this great big internet! It's a lot of work, and a lot of fun.Peter Greenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17806372860467057912noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4637227068206470117.post-30258869088017603142011-03-24T16:12:47.870-07:002011-03-24T16:12:47.870-07:00I changed some of the verses, also added extra lin...I changed some of the verses, also added extra lines. As long as you enjoyed it, that`s all that matters. Thanks you, you are awesome!Amanda Mirandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13862027490366822209noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4637227068206470117.post-29571158403502808782011-03-24T12:58:01.224-07:002011-03-24T12:58:01.224-07:00@Amanda: Ah! I came back too much later to remembe...@Amanda: Ah! I came back too much later to remember the ending properly; I suspect a who has been changed to a where, making a loss into a hope: I could be rather wrong, though. Thanks again for the poem, either way - enjoyed it twice!Peter Greenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17806372860467057912noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4637227068206470117.post-90296669681844557612011-03-24T11:09:31.514-07:002011-03-24T11:09:31.514-07:00Thank you for reading, Marinela.Thank you for reading, Marinela.Amanda Mirandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13862027490366822209noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4637227068206470117.post-35761027223777120222011-03-24T10:45:22.640-07:002011-03-24T10:45:22.640-07:00Thank you Max. It comes naturally.Thank you Max. It comes naturally.Amanda Mirandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13862027490366822209noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4637227068206470117.post-48575606118064368472011-03-24T00:56:00.908-07:002011-03-24T00:56:00.908-07:00Great poem, Amanda. Wisely done!
Short PoemsGreat poem, Amanda. Wisely done!<br /><a href="http://marinelareka.com/" rel="nofollow">Short Poems</a>M. Rekahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12178807956502786062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4637227068206470117.post-86371930399192899502011-03-22T22:22:31.163-07:002011-03-22T22:22:31.163-07:00This is great, Amanda. Very melancholy.This is great, Amanda. Very melancholy.Maxmillian Henckehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15656638868535133456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4637227068206470117.post-13315099066073556572011-03-22T21:08:35.835-07:002011-03-22T21:08:35.835-07:00Thank you so much! I changed the ending a little, ...Thank you so much! I changed the ending a little, for the better I hope. Can you tell?Amanda Mirandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13862027490366822209noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4637227068206470117.post-62376449129550461682011-03-22T09:59:08.415-07:002011-03-22T09:59:08.415-07:00Well! As Socrates reputedly said re: love (Bloom t...Well! As Socrates reputedly said re: love (Bloom translation, eughk), 'was there ever a madder pleasure?'. Spring, and the time for it! I really liked "the clock strikes goodbye' - excellent.<br /><br />and: Thanks for the poem!Peter Greenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17806372860467057912noreply@blogger.com